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Very Minor: incorrect grammar on Skill description

Refining II reads:

"Upgrade your own self with Refining II and you immediately notice a a 25% reduction in the amount of energy and a 50% decrease in time it takes to grind down a chunk. Not bad at all."

(Note the "a a" at "a a 25%". It probably should be a single "a".)

Posted 11 months ago by jong Subscriber! | Permalink

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  • Thanks jong, we'll get a a vowel scalpel out.
    Posted 11 months ago by kevbob Subscriber! | Permalink
  • Similar minor issue, while I'm thinking about it:  

    If you select the donate option on a Nietzsche doll, you get a text response that begins: "You tried to donate to a Friedrich Nietzche doll"  

    Should that second "to" be struck?  Would make more sense.  
    Or perhaps: "You tried to donate a Friedrich Nietzsche doll to the giants"
    Posted 11 months ago by Red Sauce Subscriber! | Permalink