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A Trip To Hell - Short Poem

I made this poem thing to drop in hell because I thought it would be fun, kinda forgot you can't drop anything there and was disappointed so I shall just put it here XD enjoy.

There once was a glitch,
Who had an uncontrollable itch.
For hooch, wine, and beer of all kind,
searching for something he'd never find.
He drank to the bottom and had his last,
if only he hadn't gone through it all so fast.
He wandered and wandered all around hell,
Then stumbled upon a barman willing to sell.
His unquenchable thirst would always be fed,
With the dark, ominous Wine Of The Dead.

Posted 5 months ago by Adam :D Subscriber! | Permalink

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  • He drank and he drank and he jumped from his seat
    in the fiery Hell Bar. He leapt to his feet
    and gave a cry: "I can fly!" he screamed.
    "In Hell! I can jump! It's more then I've dreamed!"

    And he explored Naraka; every rock, every pit,
    until one day he decided, "That's it!
    "I've seen every crack, every crevice in Hell.
    They're boring. The fire pits? Boring as well."

    So he squished a few grapes and headed back to the top,
    To Ur, where grass grows, sloths munch, and foxes hop,
    Where the air is light and the sun is bright,
    And it is not eternal night,

    And he jumped around because it was so vast,
    A place to explore! he'd never reach his last
    Area; there'd always be more land to see.
    That's how it seemed to him. He was free!

    And he traveled to Uralia and mined sparkly,
    And he jumped up to Roobrik and stared at the sea,
    And he walked to Ix and harvested all the spice,
    And he leaped to Groddle Forest and planted some rice,

    And he found a toy vendor and bought some dice,
    And he rolled one and summoned something not-very-nice,
    And the Rook came along and ate all his animal friends
    And I've forgotten the rest, so here this story ends.
    Posted 5 months ago by Sororia Rose Subscriber! | Permalink
  • Wow that was really good :D took me forever just to write my little part
    Posted 5 months ago by Adam :D Subscriber! | Permalink
  • I am in awe of both of your poem writing skills! Well done!
    Posted 5 months ago by Hua Subscriber! | Permalink
  • haha brilliant!!!
    Posted 5 months ago by Cryztal Subscriber! | Permalink