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[OPEN] Grammar Error: Soil Appreciation II

"With Soil Appreciation II, tending a Patch takes half as much time AND more XP each time, plus more chance of extracting Loam from delicious Dirt Piles. What's more: this skill is also a must-have for several other handy skills. Go soil!"


You're missing a verb before "more XP each" unless you mean to say it "takes half as much XP", in which case the grammar is correct.


My suggestion: ...tending a Patch takes half as much time AND (gives/grants/generates) more XP each time, ...

Posted 14 months ago by Bashere Subscriber! | Permalink